Peer-Edit Partner

I met up with my peer-edit partner Jahsette last week. We discussed my introduction paragraph and thesis statement. She was a great help and had good feedback. We have the same sweedish partner and we plan to go somewhere with him later today.

Introduction- Essay II

I have viewed a few different fashion shows since I joined Second Life. In my opinion its not only a great way to find out the latest trends, but also most of the items are available for the items are available for purchase right after the show. The fashion shows are life like and have an array of assortments. I never would've thought there would be so many things in Second Life to do for entertainment. When it comes to entertainment in Second Life, there are several activities available including virtual concerts, fashion shows, clubs and shopping.

Revised Thesis

When it comes to entertainment in Second Life, there are several activities available including virtual concerts, clubs, movies, and shopping.

Thesis

When it comes to entertainment in Second Life there are endless amounts of activities to partake in such as clubs, concerts, watch movies, and visit other places around the virtual world.

Peer-Edit Partner

Last week before I left town I made an effort to find a peer-edit partner. I came across two people who needed peer-edit partners. Elisala is one and the other is Jahsette. Myself and Elisala sit down and exchanged e-mail address and I looked over his introduction of what he had. I explained to him what i would change and what i would do differently and he seemed to understand well. Myself and Jahsette were not able to meet up yet but i'm looking forward to it when we do.

Car Accident

I haven't been on my blog all week because, I recently got into a horrific car accident. I fell asleep behind the wheel. The car flipped twice and 3 out of 4 people that were in the car had on a seatbelt. The airbags did not deploy. I'm just so thankful to be alive and able to tell the story. I am truly blessed beyond belief. Its funny how something can turn your life around so fast. I suffered numerous injuries. Fractured ankle, Bruised chest, shoulder, ribs and right side.

Sweedish Partner

Still haven't gotten in contact with my sweedish partner. I e-mailed him four times and attached dr. carter once. I am going to e-mail him again and attach dr. c again today and see what happens. I hate to admit but i'm kinda jealous that in class I was sitting next to someone and she teleported to a club with her sweedish partner. Really neat but I feel kinda left out. Hopefully, Something will happen soon.