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About Me
- Brittany Hill
- Warrensburg, Missouri, United States
- I'm the nicest person you'll ever meet!!! I'm really friendly, Love people, Traveling, and watching sports!!! I am a Junior at UCM and a Marketing major.
At Ball State University
My older brother and I
good topic...need to fix the dangling modifier "in" ...the sentence..."..endless amounts of activities to partake in..." revise that part...also, avoid using words like "partake"...look at the list of words and phrases to avoid....revise this and email to me asap....
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